The
Family Trip
In these recent thirty years, China is
a country which one developed so fast. It surprised people all over the world, but
every step doesn’t improve that easily. China had a series of revolutions, and finally
it got the achievement like today. And thousands of Chinese sacrificed a lot
for today’s China. In fact, my family is as normal as the most Chinese
families. My family had been through the development of China. That’s also the reason why my family move to
the United States. This is my sixth month in the United States, and it’s my
father’s seventh year in here, I really appreciated that I could have a chance
to have different experience.
Because of Chinese economic
revolution, a lot of factories shut down, and my parents faced the crisis that
they would lose their jobs. Finally my father decided to take a chance in
Japan. Twenty years ago, the country didn’t need to afford too
much country’s factories. Instead, it needed a new economic revolution. In that
situation, the Chinese government decided to develop Chinese individual economy
and then the government stopped paying lots of state-owned factories. Therefore
a lot of state-owned factories shut down and my parents’ state-owned factory also
faced challenges. Although their factory was still running, everybody knew the
deadline was coming soon. In that situation, when I was a baby all the family’s
burden came to my father. Japan is a developed country, so finally he resigned his
job at the factory and went to Japan as a cook.
About two years later my father came back from Japan and Chinese
individual economic revolution, stock market had started to developed after two
years passed. The steps of Chinese revolution never stopped. However,
it
was just the start of Chinese stock market, and the market was unmeasured,
there were some parts unclear. Then people called them grey areas”. When my
father came back he took back all the money he saved in Japan. He was the same
as thousands of Chinese people who wanted to be rich in one night. A lot of
inside information came from “his friends”, so he carried the greedy dream and
couldn’t wait any moment. He put all his money into the stock market. At first,
he earned a lot, nearly like three times more than before. Unfortunately soon
after he lost all his money. It was miniature of most Chinese who wanted to be
rich at one night.
He got another chance to work in the U.S and he still dreamed
to be rich, he complained all the time about the differences between America
and China. Because of the stress from family and the difficulty of finding jobs
in China, he got the chance to work in the United States, eventually he got the
green card to apply mom and me come to Chicago. Chicago was the place which
always showed up in my dream, also a place where my dad wanted to achieve his “American
Dream”. He still can’t be rich one night in America, he always complain about
how America stupid is and how much rich people he knows in China.
The next generation, as my generation, can through
study hard to achieve dreams. Nowadays, more and more Chinese people immigrate to
the U.S. Some of them are international students, some of them because of work
problems. We all work so hard and want to stay here to create our new world. We
finally arrived in a new land. People who came to the U.S because of different
reasons. But this country isn’t heaven. It’s a world full of competitions. New immigration
used to have the stories in their motherland and will start another new chapter
in USA. Even though I don’t know where my future is, I am supposed to
appreciate it and achieve the first dream I used to have.
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ReplyDeleteYour family experience made me feel inspired.There is only one thing that makes a dream impossible to achieve: the fear of failure. I also believe that nothing is impossible.
ReplyDeleteYour family experience made me feel inspired.There is only one thing that makes a dream impossible to achieve: the fear of failure. I also believe that nothing is impossible.
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ReplyDeleteInteresting! I liked your father even I don't know him. Seems like he is the person who never give up from his dream. It is really good. You explained very well. Thanks for sharing your family's experience
Hi your essay is really interesting and organize. Your introduction is the one that capture my attention to read more about your family history because I wanted to know about your two experiences.
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