Family Dream
Do you have a dream? What is your dream? People all over the world dream
of happiness and a better life. To live a better life is my dream, as well as
my family’s dream. A family cannot fulfill a dream without its members’ hard-work
or the nation’s stable policy. As the modern Chinese generation, we all
benefited from the Reform and Opening-up Policy, which was initiated by one of
the former Chinese Presidents Deng Xiaoping in 1979. This policy has not only reformed
China’s economy, culture and policies, but also opened up China to outside
countries. The Reform and Opening-up Policy has had great effects on China, but
also on my family. Thanks to this policy, my family has been able to fulfill
our family dream step by step to lead a better life.
At the beginning, the Reform and Opening-up Policy gave my father the
first step to fulfill our family dream. My father was born on 1953, which was
eight years after World War II. At that time, China was very poor; people lived
in hard time and suffered from hunger and poverty. My father had to work as a
farmer to support his family after graduating from high school. However, since
China has pursued the Reform and Opening-up Policy, China’s economy has become better,
and the people’s living standards have been improved. Firstly, my father had a chance
to obtain wealth and get lifted out of poverty. My father grew large amounts of
rice and vegetables, so he could make money to feed his family and provide them
warm clothing. Furthermore, my father got married and built up a comfortable family.
He married my mother who was introduced by his relatives in 1980. In order to
build a comfortable home, my parents worked hard from dawn to night in the
field. No longer had living in the old house, my family and his family moved
into a new house which had a television, washing machine, and refrigerator.
In addition, thanks to the Reform and Opening-up Policy, I could take the
second step to fulfill our family dream, and I had the chance to receive
nine-year compulsory education and chase my dreams independently. In the old
China, girls didn’t have the chance to go to school and get good education. They
could not work outside, and just stayed at home and did housework. They got
married by following their parents’ will, and they didn’t have the chance to
pursue their dreams. Luckily, because China carried out the Reform and
Opening-up Policy, I was able to go to school to get nine years of compulsory
education. I was able to enter a teacher training school and graduated from
college with my hard work. Moreover, I could fulfil my dreams independently. Fortunately,
I got my favorite teaching job after I graduated from the college; I married a
man who I love him and trust him not like my mother’s following her parents’
will. Finally, I chose to immigrate to the U.S because I admired its high
quality education and good medical benefits.
Finally, thanks to the Reform and Opening-up Policy, my daughter can
continue to pursue our family dream in the United States. The Reform and
Opening-up Policy offered my family the chance to get U.S. visas and start a
new life in this country. Moreover, the education here is so excellent and the medical
benefits are so good. Not like Chinese spoon-feed education, American education
cares more about students’ ability of imagination, thinking, creativity, and
manipulating information. Fortunately, my daughter is getting a good education in
school now. She is learning in an active and energetic way, and she is becoming
smarter and more independent. In addition, as a member of a low income family,
my daughter gets free and good medical care from the U.S government. For
instance, my daughter has free physical and dental check so that she can grow
up healthily.
In conclusion, my family is just one of many families that are fighting
for their dream. The family dream, which is to live a better life, has kept us
fighting for it from generation to generation. Thanks to the Reform and
Opening-up Policy, my father, my daughter and I have opportunities to obtain
wealth, receive good education, get good medical benefits, and pursue
independence. Everything we do today is to weave our wings for our family dream
so that it can come true one day.
Your essay are clear and good organized, and it is easy to read. I am so happy the Reform and Opening-up Policy gave your parents, you daughter, and you have a better life. In addition, your family's dream and your dream come true.
ReplyDeleteHi Bingyi.
ReplyDeleteI like your essay. Your essay is really clear, organized and interesting. What it surprised me was how much hard you have worked to have a better life. Thanks to your essay I could know more about you and your country. Moreover, it was interesting to know how the opening-up policy has brought a good impact in China. To conclude, I want to let you know that you are a very strong woman that is looking for better future life for you and your family. Keep working hard until you achieve your goals!
I love your hook so much, and I like the way you mentioned DREAMS.
ReplyDeleteYour essay is so clear and easy to follow and understand.
I am so happy that you, your father, your daughter and your family have a good life.
Hi Bing,
ReplyDeletei like your essay very much. First, you point the topic directly, which is family dream, so it is easy for me to understand your essay. Second, through reading your essay, i know much about how the opening up policy is impacted your family hugely. Last but not least, this impact give your family many benefits and happiness. Thank you for sharing your story.
You have a good introduction and conclusion for your essay. It is great to know how your family's lives become better. In addition, keep chasing the dream you and your family have.
ReplyDeleteyou hook is great, and your essay is clear and have a good organization. actually, China is become better and better after Deng xiaoping won approval for a set of economic reforms that opened China to foreign trade, technology and investment, and i believe our country will continue develop and become better.
ReplyDeleteI like your essay is very clear and organized.I hope that you can make real all your dreams.
ReplyDeleteI like your essay is very clear and organized.I hope that you can make real all your dreams.
ReplyDeleteDreams about to come true in the U.S, hard-working people deserved to have better future.
ReplyDeleteI have an American dream, which is to be a pharmacist in the U.S. I hope that your family dream will come true. life is not so hard!
ReplyDeleteI have an American dream, which is to be a pharmacist in the U.S. I hope that your family dream will come true. life is not so hard!
ReplyDeleteHi Bing,
ReplyDeleteIt is very interesting story, I really enjoyed. I think it is very important when a person has dream. I really happy for your family.