tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633381074002735748.post5486300706977940090..comments2015-11-15T20:56:24.767-08:00Comments on ESL 100 Fall 2015: Michalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12566435713877932379noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633381074002735748.post-22806187127495274892015-11-15T11:57:07.019-08:002015-11-15T11:57:07.019-08:00Hi your essay is really interesting and organize. ...Hi your essay is really interesting and organize. Your introduction is the one that capture my attention to read more about your family history because I wanted to know about your two experiences. <br />thank you for sharing<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09526886417762759977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633381074002735748.post-56919519300141795312015-11-14T22:02:17.118-08:002015-11-14T22:02:17.118-08:00Hello,
Interesting! I liked your father even I don...Hello,<br />Interesting! I liked your father even I don't know him. Seems like he is the person who never give up from his dream. It is really good. You explained very well. Thanks for sharing your family's experience Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11108517657375531894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633381074002735748.post-7532688785517534492015-11-14T20:27:32.107-08:002015-11-14T20:27:32.107-08:00 Your family experience made me feel inspired.Ther... Your family experience made me feel inspired.There is only one thing that makes a dream impossible to achieve: the fear of failure. I also believe that nothing is impossible. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13954637110495997187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633381074002735748.post-8077542727858191792015-11-14T20:27:28.686-08:002015-11-14T20:27:28.686-08:00 Your family experience made me feel inspired.Ther... Your family experience made me feel inspired.There is only one thing that makes a dream impossible to achieve: the fear of failure. I also believe that nothing is impossible. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13954637110495997187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633381074002735748.post-85817098716590607302015-11-14T10:23:24.010-08:002015-11-14T10:23:24.010-08:00I like your introduction, your introduction very a...I like your introduction, your introduction very attract readers to read your essay.In your body paragraphs had enough detail explanation your father experiences.You did a great job.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00770216081650805404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633381074002735748.post-80925639118879195452015-11-11T21:11:24.535-08:002015-11-11T21:11:24.535-08:00I like the way you concluced. It suprised me. I th...I like the way you concluced. It suprised me. I think it is a good way to learn how to make a good concluction. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05089356707658664812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633381074002735748.post-66498392982249376102015-11-10T17:43:46.873-08:002015-11-10T17:43:46.873-08:00Your family history is very interesting. You have ...Your family history is very interesting. You have good explanation on your father's hard working and his dream. Of course, family can force people to fight for better life for them. Overall, your introduction and conclusion was very clear. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15461051133679923134noreply@blogger.com