tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633381074002735748.post4415786531492025113..comments2015-11-15T20:56:24.767-08:00Comments on ESL 100 Fall 2015: American DreamMichalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12566435713877932379noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633381074002735748.post-91559598730292432752015-11-14T11:58:00.561-08:002015-11-14T11:58:00.561-08:00You are really lucky to have your father who worke...You are really lucky to have your father who worked hard for many years to support the family. You are good at making details in the essay.<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05137217237661745090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633381074002735748.post-82844000169362105232015-11-08T14:35:32.496-08:002015-11-08T14:35:32.496-08:00After reading your essay, I feel sad about your fa...After reading your essay, I feel sad about your family's history. It must a very hard time for your grandfather and father to support the family. Moreover, your hook is very interesting. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15461051133679923134noreply@blogger.com